Dead Man Walking seems quite interesting... I haven't figured out how to save, though... Through favorites, maybe, but for some reason I couldn't add the page there, so...

Do I need an account for that? That'd be a bit... Hmm... Weird, I think.

But yeah, thanks for telling us about this, it's looking nice... Some of the storries are, at least, found a few which were just... Umm... Yeah... Read Dark's post again.

I love that story dead man walking, I really hope that it gets a DB link as it has over 2000 pages and 3 major possible directions to go in, plus an in depth score.
The writing, while not novel quallity, is more like short story quallity and situational rather than eloquent, but there is good sentence structure, and never once did I find my self getting board.
It requires you to read carefully, but it's an excelent story.
There are very few spelling mistakes as in 1 or 2 per every 3 pages or so, and pages are usually long.
This is my score below

Here’s a rundown of how you did –

You Killed 6 Zombies

You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies

You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies

You Killed 0 Ghouls

You Killed 0 Banshees

You Killed 1 Hell Hounds

You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies

You Killed 2 People

You Saved 5 People (including yourself, unless you died)

You were eaten by 0 Zombies

Your Overall Score: 20595

(You played through 87 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Survivalist)

I wasn't bitten once, nor did I die, the 6 zombies I took out were as I was leaving in the last part of the story lol, and it went over with out a hitch.
I avoided zombies as much as possible, and went stealth when ever I could.

I killed 2 people, the first I felt bad about, it was a secritary in a bathroom who was terrifyed and histaricle and wanted to go with me, but at the other end of the hallway was a door and there were hundreds of zombies pounding on it because she attracted them with her screaming.
My choices were either dash for the other door with her, which would probably get us both eaten since they were closing in fast, to kill her and spare her getting eaten alive, or run and use her as a destraction while she got eaten.
In this game I chose what I would have had to choose if I was in this situation and could see.
I figured that it was like a 90 percent chance we would both get eaten, so I killed her by hitting her in the head with a crowbar.
I felt bad about of it of course and it screwed up my score, but I'd rather that than have her eaten, besides they got distracted by her body anyway and left me alone.
I figured a mercy killing was better then us both being eaten alive.
I saved a little boy and my family because the little boy was a good hider and because I was close to my house when I had the choice to pick him up.
Speaking of my house that's the rout I took, saving my family, which I did with out a hitch.
The other person I killed was the jerk who had held my wife hostage in the game and raped her, my carictor pulped his head with a crowbar, and it was fun!
lol
I did go past one girl on the road, and didn't pick her up even though she was asking, which I felt bad about because she was pretty frantic, but she had a hockeystick and she looked like she could sorta take care of her self.
She really freaked out and looked scared when I drove past her and left saying I was sorry, which made me feel bad cause I guess she wasn't a strong as she looked, but I had to get to my house as fast as I could, and didn't want to get the little boy hurt, plus the game kept suggesting that it was a trap.
Anyway I'm going to play it in a different way again, lol, this game rocks

Hi

here's my epilog for land of the midnight sun, which was great.

Epilogue for Ari Peace-Bringer to the Land

Parents would pass on the legend of Ari, the second Ipsissimus and bringer of the second age of the country.  The legend went something as follows.

Ari was born to two loving parents, unfortunately for the family, the birth was hard on the mother and she passed away.  The man who delivered the baby was called Tom Wan. Tom Wan wanted to ensure Ari's success in his life and he cast a spell on a woman there, to make sure that he'd get the help he needed.  The woman was a girl named Maya Korman, best friends with the late mother of Ari and mother of one.  Ari grew up in a small farming community, known as Ni town.  At age fourteen he fell in love with his beautiful childhood friend, Artemis.  An evil group of people called the Crimson Knights attacked their village, hoping to kill Ari and his love, because they were afraid of what he might be able to accomplish.

Ari was saved by some brave men, lead by a very brave man named Gavin. Gavin, along with his good friends Peter, Scott and Trowell, as well as twenty others, drove off the eight powerful Crimson Knights.  They kept Ari under their protection, but Artemis became very sick and so they brought the two of them to their incredible castle called Icarus.  Once at Icarus, Ari became the youngest student in the Order of the Midnight Sun's history at age fourteen.  He completed his entry test with a score of 10/15.  After he spent six months making sure that he wanted to be in the order, he agreed.  Part of the initiation ceremony is a test, and Ari, along with twenty others were stuck in kilometer long tunnels and left to fend for themselves and find a way out.  Ari helped everyone involved get out, in a never before seen feat. It took them about a year but with Ari's supreme leadership skills, everyone got out alive.

Ari turned more heads when he showed what he was beginning to be capable of, actually managing to destroy Runes. Runes are near-on impossible to destroy and he did it easily.  Word spread quickly and soon Ari was famous, but he never let it get to his head.  Soon, a rival nation declared war on our country and most of the Order was sent to help save the country while the Crimson Knight's looked after their own goals.  Ari was sent to make sure the Crimson Knights couldn't achieve their goals and ruin the world.  He had to make sure that they didn't get Daleir Mcelley's necklace from his tomb. That meant that Ari had to find his tomb first and he scoured the four corners of the country to find it.  He completed a gigantic maze, he singlehandedly defeated an army of thousands of men in the southeast, essentially turning the tide of the war, he fought various battles in the southwest and won the front there, and he met Tom Wan, for what he thought was the first time in his life.

Tom Wan eventually showed him the tomb. Ari had to overcome a great personal battle to finally get the necklace from the tomb, but he beat the Crimson Knights to it and when he returned to Icarus, he was a hero, but that wasn't the end of the story.  He would be tutored and taught by Tom Wan and would soon meet Horus, the God of the sky.  Soon after though, the order was betrayed and attacked by most of the Crimson Knights while the Orders forces were out trying to save their Magi from the same Knights.  The necklace was stolen by the double-crossing Jared Mcelley and his true love was captured.  Ari, determined to fix things, traveled to Kordigan and for the second time in his life witnessed tragedy as he was forced to watch Artemis die.  He tapped into vast personal reserves and achieved the rank of Ipsissimus and defeated Jared Mcelley. After that, he allowed the Crimson Knights to live, and they never bothered anyone ever again..

Ari would rebuild the order and the castle, into a far greater thing.  He encouraged the order to be even more active in the community and changed some order doctrines including a certain age restriction. Eventually the entire country was put under his order's rule and he brought prosperity and freedom to the world like never before.

It is rumored that Tom Wan visited him once and again and they would smoke a pipe together and talk as old friends.  Ari never found love again, but he finds out that Artemis secretly bore a child before she died and Ari properly parents the young girl that he names Anna.  He ensures that what happened with Jared would never happen again. He lived happily knowing that he would find Artemis in the after-life.

The order's numbers grew and soon there were many castles devoted to it.  Rumors of the teachings spreading into other countries became facts and on his deathbed Ari was seen talking to Tom Wan about a tomb.  There are still many treasure-hunters out there searching for it to this day and Ari still watches from the heavens, protecting the Order of the Midnight Sun and all who follow the path of light.

Love is the Law. Love Under Will.

comments on the zombie game are below

I took the boy cause he was a good hider, lol, and by the way I hate to ruin it, but.

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The tomgirl was bitten, and later turns into a zombie, you can kill her with out risk though and you don't lose any humanity I think.

an interesting thing is that the very first time I one the game, I didn't act as a carrier and give my wife the virus, killing her but every other time I have, I think it is not the drueler zombie strangely, but maybe the 2 women you have to kill if you grab the gun from the large hall off the security hall on the other end of the area from the bathrooms which I haven't done till these times after the first time.

I didn't take the hole school because I knew it would be a risk, and I didn't stay because I did not know that at the time zombies took only a month to rought away.

I later discovered that the hole school had died, which made me feel bad but like I said, lol I didn't know and I thought they could keep it together, guess not.

Okay, now I remmber it... It wasn't that girl on the road that I killed, it was a boy on the school... But well, I still had to do it, he was turning.

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I liked land of the midnight son fine enough, though the maze took entirely too long, and I only got it with some serious guess work and at least 45 minutes of walking around.

I have not tryed necromancer, but after completing eternal, I don't think I'll try it.

For me eternal was a huge let down, the gameplay was so very linniar.
Often completely reasonable choices, though there were few in the firstplace, ended up with some drawn out anoying explination of why I died in some rediculis way that could have been avoided, aka, he only wanted the story to go in one direction for most of it.
Also I know you were raised to be a cold blooded killer and all, but with the amount of confliction in this dudes messed up mind, you'd think there would be a somewhat good aligned path.
Now I'm not saying I don't like playing evil chars in games, but really, you can't even become a soldier, and while the shadow guys seem better than the empire, there's basicly a huge part of the story, between years 31 and 34, where you almost get your girlfriend killed in stupid ways, allow some ass to enslave a bunch of inasent people with out any choice in the matter about killing him, and use small children as suaside bombers.
While all that is kinda necisary in some parts, that's only because you don't have enough choices.
Any minor streighing from the path of the ultimate loser is punished with emediate death, and he completely forgets emportant things like how the darrow captured a lot of shadow women at the gloom fortrace, pop, out his mind, what a dumbass my char is.
I would have liked to be at least neutral, but no, I'm constantly forced towards the worst choices for everyone.
No, I think I'll stick with the zombie story and land of the midnight son, in those, my char actually has some choices, and isn't a complete thug with no brains.

you guys might wana try out lightspeed, it's short and simple, but fun, and has good plot twists.
The spelling mistakes on the first few pages aren't bad though anoying, and that's only a few pages, like 5, and still not menny mistakes, from there it pretty much evens out, and you get maybe 1 or 2 per 3 pages.

Yes, I'll try necromancer, but just from the title, I can guess that I'll be locked in to being an asshole again, groan.

Obviously there is some good stuff on this site after all, I will check it out sinse as people know I'm a gamebook fan and odds are it'll get a db page if  I do indeed encounter stuff that is actually worth  reading, aka, doesn't sound like it was by an idiot who is either 12 or has the Iq of a 12 year old and about as much grasp of English grammar and  propper sentences as  Gengis Kahn! .

I  certainly wouldn't claime to be perfect on either spelling or grammar, but when something reads like

"and you likem, go 2 lik dis ruum and 2 kill  lotsa fings w ur gun cos u is lik dis t0f  asasin gi w0t  dnt care  bout  no shit"

I don't really see the point in wasting my time, or indeed anyone else's with it,  and believe me, I'm not exaggerating, well not at least too much .

Yeah, it is always good to look at things an extra time. I wonder if I should create an account too, I doubt I really need one, though.

Well the developer has thankfully fixed the save issue, indeed now all! the options in game are fully accessible including go bac  to choose another path and restart as well as save.

I'm quite impressed sinse I only contact the developer about this yesterday and it's already fixed, so I'd definately recommend everyone have a go as some of the games on there are great quality.

I know for a fact the site  works with supernova, and Shadowdragon dropped me a line saying he'd tried with jaws and nvda,   though of course where websites are concerned usually unless things are very complex most screen readers have equal usability on various pages so it should also work with window eyes and system access as well.

either  way I'd now distinctly recommend giving it a try.

The developer is going to fix the birthday thing sinse that caused problems for me too, but in the mean time if you contact the dev about creating an account that should work.

I don't think you'll have seen the save or go back links unless! you have an account, maybe your thinking of the "back to beginning" and other standard links that turn up in the stories themselves? either way they're now fixed so no trouble  there.

As for a db entry, well I tried writing one up this evening, unfortunately  however there seems to be a goblin in the works sinse I couldn't create the new page, but as soon as this is fixed the game will indeed get an entry.

Firstly, thanks Dark for confirming I'm not the only one who's had trouble with that dad ratted birthday thing. But, how do I contact the dev?
Unless I'm not looking cloesly, which is altogether possible. I haven't found a tipicle, contact us link.

Secondly, Alex, it sounds like we had the exact same ending with DMW. lol
I must say, I was more then a little spooked when those army guys rolled up and said you can all go home now. I was like, uh...
Anyway, it was a real fun story to play, and get through.

Well I've finished dead man walking.

A little sterriotypical, even a hysterical wife,   but fun for what it did on the tin, I was quite amused with how your character was basically  brick! aka, really tough, despite being an accountant.

fun for what it was though, a regular old zombi slaughter fest.

Here’s a rundown of how you did –
You Killed 47 Zombies
You Killed 0 Drooler Zombies
You Killed 0 Bloater Zombies
You Killed 0 Ghouls
You Killed 0 Banshees
You Killed 1 Hell Hounds
You Killed 0 Cannibal Gaunt Zombies
You Killed 1 People
You Saved 60 People (including yourself, unless you died)
You were eaten by 0 Zombies
Your Overall Score: 44247
(You played through 135 of 2,131 Pages and have proven to be a Rebuilder)

I'll discuss spoilers below so if you didn't  finish the game read no  further.
As  for what people said, I don't know if you can save the secretary in the bathroom. i tried to save her but she ended up getting  munched outside the security door, though luckily I'd got the combination so could lock it. I saved the little boy in the boat house and got him to safety, saved my wife, (I'm not even sure how you get her killed unless you go down to the basement  first or don't have the fire axe), and finished up taking all the people in the school out to the campsite. 

I'm not sure if the one person i killed was the prisoner  in my house having his way with my wife,  or the girl with the hocky stick who got into the car and who'd been bitten. I took the option of inviting her in if I tied her up, but when she refused that I let her come anyway. Luckily i think because I drove my car into  the garage she was still wearing  the  seatbelt so when she turned I got to just axe her.

So my  character finished up pretty well indeed I was told I got the best possible  ending which was fun, and I only had to take back once,  I was actually quite amused how the author tended to reward you for taking your time to explore and also for going gun hoe without  being stupid.

while I do wish the characters were a little  better, and I would've liked to see some extra  zombi types mentioned in the virus description I got for winning, indeed the  hole cult thing in the church looked awsome, i did rather enjoy the game, rated it a 7 out of 8 and will likely play through again at some point to try and see some different paths, though for now I want to try some other games, in particular dungeon stompage, which has a silly name but a full on stats and combat system and is basically an rpg.