All right, so a small niggle with something said about twenty or so posts back.
A ton of time, testing and assets went into this game. That's awesome. But given its price point, I feel that the game requires an editor.
There don't appear to be many straight-up spelling mistakes, but there are plenty of missing commas, awkward phrases and the like all over the script. Hundreds of them. No exaggeration on this.
The issue is that now it's probably next door to impossible to fix it without a ton of time and effort that is probably better spent elsewhere, but if the script had ever been in one file, then that would have been the time to clean things up.
Why do I mention this? Because higher price points usually translate to higher professionalism. This game shows that off in a lot of ways, but in its script it's still falling short, and that may hurt sales and generally doesn't give a good impression. The more you ask for a product, the more you have to care about optics.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/z8ls3rc3f4mkb … n.txt?dl=1
